Broken Heart Comments

A true depiction of what one feels and even sometimes plans in situations like this. The melancholy has been spilled very splendidly through words that grabs the readers attention..........

what a lovely poem is this one..liked it and its well written and specially i like this stanza of your poem... A lovely pigeon soars outside.. He doesn't know that i can't fight! I bravely take a heavy gun And push to head, Lets have some fun! you got 10+++++

the hidden and subtle message.. enclosed within the stanzas...stanzas finely prepare the theme to emerge..lovely piece..nice poetic skill..10++

Hi Katerina; Considering that English is probably not your home language, you have an excellent way with words. Broken Heart is a classic example of a love poem and conveys exactly what you must have felt (if it is about you!) Nice work.

hey... katerina.. the pain of a broken heart when loved and thrown apart or feeling neglected is well expressed... beautiful... it is true..the last few minutes when heart is broken.... these are things we all feel...but only those who have known the depth of love will ever reckon this pain... beautifully written..keep writing