'Broken Heart' Comments

too short but touching and well written :) .waiting for your comments too :) .thanks.

Short anbd beatiful poem i like your style

a great attitude...must hurt the girl inside....

Your strength is beautiful.

hi da, nice dear............. forgiveness is a great love.......dear

emotional! you have a large heart filled with love and forgiveness

This is adorable, love and forgiveness well expressed.

That is what love is all about...beautiful! ! very nicely done, thanks for sharing

i can never accept something like this... mine should be mine, i can never sacrifice my love to someone else...

your heart is big... Forget the times he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry, Forget the times he spoke your name, Remember now your not the same. Forget the times he held your hand, Forget the sweet things if you can, Forget the times & Don't pretend, Remember now he's just your friend..................

Lovely four lines. Nice words. good to read.

cool poem I like it..... :)

I can feel the sentiments...nice poem....10

Hi Elsee - You are lovely. You cover so much heartach in one short verse - brevity and emotion that is the essence of all POESIE D'AMOUR. Us men are so heartless at times - in the view of all the love our ladies give us. The acts of LOVE speak for themselves in the poem. 'Waited for years' 'To make him mine' 'Nurtured him with my love' (that is anelegant line) 'Raised him to shine' (awesome - our ladies do lift us up and polish us! ') then the betrayal 'Saw him with another Girl' - the bottom line in so many love poems - why oh why do we do it? . The title indicates your HEART IS BROKEN the last line indicates YOUR LOVING & FORGIVING SPIRIT is still intact. 'Wished him all the best and felt everything should be good and fine' - Beautiful! Men can break your Heart - Angel - don't ever let them break you lovely Spirit. I have scored it MAX - its so so lovely! Love in poetry - JOHN.

awww, love love break my heart everytime

I understand how you feel, i am afraid to say that he does not love but we, men, like to experiment.