Broken Heart Comments

Very specific. Sorry you hurt.

amazing poem very deep! excellent, well written

i think the guy lost something he would always repent of you were genius on this piece of work.. magnificnt...........10++

hey the poem is talking wow so we have now a new talented poetess. keep writing.

Honest criticisms, this block text style should be changed and a few spelling errors corrected. Otherwise, it was a fairly well written poem with an enticing story. Good job.

very nice piece of writing. very deep and very passionate. i cant wait to read more

I would like to know what it was in that 4 day time period that crushed your heart so much becuase I try not to be a heartbreaker because my heart was broken my something as cold as a machine and I never want anyone to feel that way for too long. the poem comes from the heart which is connected to the mind the mind is the heart of the body and what you wrote is your experience about love and its pitfalls.

The poem may be good to other people but I never had the chance to be broken hearted. But the poem is fine.

seems you were deep in love and he just played with you... four days.. wow.. you shouldn't cry for some onelike that.. life will reward you, with some one thousands of times better. just keep your head up, be strong, show everyone you are a great woman! make him know what he lost.. nice poem: D

You write from ur heart...gud work. Keep it up

this is good, real good.i liked it. keep writing

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it is such a lovey poem...it touches me....

Dont listen to idiots, it can take anywhere from 20years to 20 seconds for someone to break your heart, I really liked yout poem by the way

Four days to cause a broken heart? ? You have to live with it for ages, to have a real impact.Nicely written, anyway.