Broken Heart Comments

gud.........................................................!

I learned also the hard and painful ways how to survive and move on. Like I said in my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, ' where there is an ending, there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky'.... Also, please check: A BROKEN HEART and you will see that you are not the only one going through this painful situation! A well penned and poignant write! Keep it up! 19+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

oh! broken heart emo, why do we always write the, first person pronoun, 'I' always in capital letters. As long as you live this world exists.so only do we write like that. in spite i feel sad about an innocent heart being broken. feelings and passions are mighty. True. But, are they not our own. I believe though it is hard yet it can be consoled and pacified. Truest love tells not tales, nor tarry nor fancy. It is a blessed burden light as well heavy. There the truest love must match in life.Life is a complete poem. love is a stanza and yet the best of all. it is the climax. Even then life is incomplete without it. but we cannot dissipate life with it. love can effloresence in the form of kindness, mercy, pity and what not. please do try to be a bold 'I'. one cannot draw a picture without a background. our body and life is the background. What cannot be cured has to be endured. Take heart dear baby.

It's a painful reality to experience.

Wonderful and beautiful instead of the sadness. I liked it. Spread your wings and soar far away You'll forget those hurts day by day Life is a journey - experiences of cheer and gloom Don't be pessimist they'll come the days of bloom -SMILE-

Your pain is so wonderful.. and words makes me bleed more and more. Anyways, Merry Christmas.

This is powerful and sad. Seeing two together is hard. It is a good thing though, because you have an answer to part of the situation. You can go on from there. Having answers is hard sometimes, but we need to know. We cannot let go and move on without knowing the truth. Good, clear write of what is real. DC

But it wasnt.. It was reality..... What i saw was.... My love was out with another girl.... He cheated on me.... I couldnt believe it..... I ran home crying... Wishing this would of never happened... what a story type poem is this one..broken you and broken heart this poem.. it seems your story and they ay you wrote is impressive and heart catcy one.. enjoyed it a lot..well done..keen on wriitng..10/10

oh, you have such a nice and vivid ideas nice poem well done Luwi

perfect its wonder ful

amazing poem.....keep it up! ..

A really good poem. I give you a 10. Lynn

I love the words flow..........like a river of emotion.Good stuff dear.

awwww! so much love! ! ! sad penned beautifully! 10+

i'm so sorry from the bottom of my shattered excuse of a heart. i know what it feels like to be rejected and forgotten. it's a very beautiful poem full or the pain you're trying to release. i hope things become better for you.

Hahaha..that what happened to me..with my first love..hahaha. what else can I say..you trusted the first person you love..the first person person you loved..well...the first person could also break your heart indeed..but funny thing is..if your love left you for your bff..hahaha.funny isn't it? well.. i like this..10/10. go emo! ! ! !

what a sweet romatinic and full for heartiest love poem...means you are in love with some one, who stays inside you and you consider him your own and yes he is your own, , , best of luck..10/10

Broken Heart! Shun him like the fart..........a good write.........

Sad poem...well written...............

nice realistic poem, well written..10+++