Broken Heart Comments
You asked me if I knew what I had done
How I pushed the knife deep and cut your heart wide open....
to bleed...
pieces of your broken heart falling to the floor.
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Pauline, It is not too late, this poem is romantic and beautiful. C'est tres joli! I hope that you have been physically violent, only poetic expression and idyllic violence are acceptable. I love it and bonne chance. HL
Wonderful expression of ones feeling touching well written
beautiful poem..the emotions are displayed and portrayed beautifully.. u amazing bravo!
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9/6/2025 9:50:53 PM # 1.0.0
Pauline, I really loved your poem, your heartbreaking yet convincing tone, you managed to evoke the senses of your readers by visualizing your poem, I felt like Im watching a scene, a very tense and sad one, so brilliant, creative and artistic, it's a well written piece of art, I wouldn't change anything, keep it up :)