Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

He ripped my heart in two halves,
No more kisses, hugs or laughs.
My heart was one, now it's two,
This poem is real, and 100% true.
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~ Jon London ~ 08 February 2009

Never a true'r word spoken, very true where our hearts are concerned, we taste the fruits of love just some leave a bitterness in our mouths afterwards, great poem, from such a fine young writer. Well done. Jon

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Aleksandra Lachut 07 February 2009

That is so true that love hurts and i am only loved by one person.

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Ency Bearis 07 February 2009

love really hurts and ripped off your heart absolutely when its not right for you...good write... nice verses...10

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Denvor Fernandez 06 February 2009

Love hurts

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Eyan Desir 31 January 2009

I love this poem, , it was made so simple easy, to read, you just get the picture, of the event.. beautiful

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Inner Whispers 27 January 2009

hmn...this is what I feel right now, tiffany...nice descrption of a bleeding heart! 10

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