Thursday, December 25, 2008

Broken Heart? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Though your heart is broken into tiny little shards
pick them up and go
like a thousand armed guards
without them
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ERNEST CLARY
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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011

A well penned and poignant write! Like you, I learned the hard and pain ways IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, and learned my lesson very well by discovering that whenever there is an ending there is also, in time and space, a new and brighter beginning! Excellent write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Walterrean Salley 14 February 2011

A broken heart is no fun. But never ever give up. Thank for thr message Ernest. 10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

what breaks ur heart makes u stronger.. finely done.. bravo

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Jessy Kemp 23 January 2009

Lovely poem, but I feel sometimes it is not that easy to just pick up the pieces and carry on. Sometimes it takes a while, but I enjoyed it. Thx

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Desiree Burdick 07 January 2009

thank you for writing this poem i needed it :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

this piece is amusing..it makes me smile..inspiring...with positive outlook to go on living despite the broken heart...pick up the pieces and be whole again... 10+++++

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