Though your heart is broken into tiny little shards
pick them up and go
like a thousand armed guards
without them
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A broken heart is no fun. But never ever give up. Thank for thr message Ernest. 10
what breaks ur heart makes u stronger.. finely done.. bravo
Lovely poem, but I feel sometimes it is not that easy to just pick up the pieces and carry on. Sometimes it takes a while, but I enjoyed it. Thx
this piece is amusing..it makes me smile..inspiring...with positive outlook to go on living despite the broken heart...pick up the pieces and be whole again... 10+++++
A well penned and poignant write! Like you, I learned the hard and pain ways IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, and learned my lesson very well by discovering that whenever there is an ending there is also, in time and space, a new and brighter beginning! Excellent write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...