Broken Goodbye Comments
That day you left me was unpredicted, while I was waiting to hear from you, your silence became the answer to all questions.
You left me with the dust of memories, the tune of songs you played me to the jokes you said to make me laugh.
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One of the best poems I've read here. Lenient and salient lines. It's a sad but persuasive piece. Do more great poems, dear poet. 10+++
The day left to you was unpredictable. Still this scribbled mind. Leaving life with dust of memories provokes thought. Heart breaks without love and without communication. Broken heart expresses sadness. An amazing poem is shared here is brilliant.10
thank you so much for the beautiful comment.... glad you enjoyed it :)
You left me with the dust of memories, the tune of songs you played me Beautiful song of love. Thanks for sharing it. 10++++
so glad you loved reading this... thank you for the rating as well :)
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7/19/2025 11:18:45 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful rendition of words from inner recesses of the heart. The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. Lovely work of art. Thanks for sharing Ana.