Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Broken Glass Comments

Rating: 5.0

Could you tell anything about the dreaming?
Cash paid after the bargaining,
a declaration just the images of a falling down,
even wild grass do more adventurer
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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