Tuesday, July 17, 2007

Broken Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie alone on the floor,
no point in living anymore.
NO one listens,
NO one cares. They
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Random Crap 09 August 2007

Powerfull poem, well done!

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** ** 20 July 2007

haaaaaaaaa WoOoW , , , , VERY NICE POEM, , , keep writting ur friend 5adija

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*Lyric * 18 July 2007

I feel like we really connect. Wow, this is me. I can feel your pain if it's about you. I always write about past experiences with the exception of a few, but great job. This is really good.

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Free 2bemeuc 17 July 2007

I have too say DITTO to the other comments....and add your not alone here We've all been there before....just at varrying degrees or stages at times in our lives.....but I can sure relate to this one right now....the pain and sadness...alI I can say is keep writing a get it out....It help work through the emotions... peace free

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Jade Leven 17 July 2007

Adding to what Carrie said, this proves how alike and different we all are. We all feel the same feelings, but we react to them in different ways. Great job.

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