Monday, April 1, 2013

Broken Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cradled your lifeless figure in my arms
Smeared blood across my fingers as I
Stroked your porcelain skin and
Dark hair back over your glassy eyes
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Hannah Hebditch
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Titi Dale 05 April 2013

Truly inspired, interesting title :) I like your works! Thanks for you share: -)

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Kelvin Owusu 01 April 2013

deep emotional piece of poetry, nicely done great work

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Vishal Sharma 01 April 2013

what a poem...so true and original..my god being so young so mature! ...god bless you and your talent...great and inspired write..

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Paul Brookes 01 April 2013

A very powerful poem. Well written but so very sad. |BB : O(

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