Thursday, April 30, 2009

Broken Girl Comments

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The girl strides desperately and painfully
through the wide open desolate
escarpment of pain and hate she
strives to be rid of, and which seems
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clayton young
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Gwendalynn Ash 10 October 2009

really like this poem Clayton...reminds me of a dark part of my past...

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Rose MaryB. 05 May 2009

Your choice in word clayton. love the vocabulary. 'escarpment' i wouldn't have even known that word excisted

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immortal Butterfly 03 May 2009

Wow Very Compelling. ~Autumn~

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clayton young

Round Rock Texas
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