Broken Friendship Comments

nice poems..keep up! !

Sometimes we decide before it happens. So beware of losing the established friendship.. Nicely written composition.

Broken friendship is always painful but the lessons learnt helps us not to make the same mistakes. Well expressed lucid poem that is full of sad emotions. Thanks for sharing.

Our friendship looked so joyful now it appears doubtful it upsets you when you see me with your friends it upsets me when I see you with my friends But now I see the truth Rollercoaster part of palship.....narration continues into intimate details.Definitely a tenner.

We all, go through our trials and tribulations! It's all part, of growing up! We get hurt, but that's the way it is, as we go along, the way. One day, you'll look back and smile, as you remember, all the incidents you went through, during this time. You did a fine job, expressing yourself! Keep up, your good work.

This was a great write and very well put. This is a situation we all go through way too many times in life. This is why it is so hard to put faith in others. We have to remind ourselves that there is good out there we just have to search for it.

Something that happens too often, well written. Great poem

a pick from life subject and you have done full justice to it...brought out the feel very well a 10

i am reminded of my freind a couple days ago, she used me... i really like this poem

Your poem is painful to me...because it reminds me, my best friend and now he is my best enemy.........keep up the good work, and keep shining....TC. Floyd Minami

This poem is AWSOME and I can really relate to it. I tried to write a poem about it but you've mastered it! Keep up the good work! P.S. You have some typos.