Monday, March 25, 2013

Broken Feathered Bird Comments

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Broken feathered bird, don't mourn your wing.
You can't fly, but oh you can sing.
You can sing of your dreams in which you soar,
You can sing of your hopes that form your core.
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Mandy Lee
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2016

You can't fly, but oh you can sing. You can sing of your dreams in which you soar, You can sing of your hopes that form your core. singing with broken wings. wonderful imagery n your heart dear poete. thank you.tony

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Nicklas Leow 16 May 2013

Short and sweet~

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Natasha Dowdy 28 March 2013

Simply beautiful! I love the symbolism.

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Valerie Dohren 25 March 2013

A lovely reverie Mandy, hope you have many more. A great metaphor.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2013

good poem. thanks.

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