Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Broken Family Comments

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Lying in my bed at night I could hear them fight and yell,
Falling asleep wishing I could fly away and escape this hell.
My dad was always in a bad mood and my mum was always crying,
But they thought they could fool me and my brother with their lying.
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Brooke Luchich
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Jahmari Thomas 16 July 2009

i love ur poetry and i wanted to no if you wood read my poems

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 July 2009

Sacrifice is the word to heal your broken family, back into places.

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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