Monday, November 3, 2008

Broken Family Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken family is all that i know tried to fix it but love would not show
Hate and hurt is carved in my mind when i feel negative i go so blind
Rewind the hands of time to the time when love was able to show
Let the tears from the years of hurt come out away with rivers they flow
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Blue Eyes 13 November 2008

what a sad story u have! i loved the emotion.

0 0 Reply

Great poem Keep writing....

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success