Monday, July 22, 2013

Broken Eyes Comments

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i breath wind into my windpipe
and, my head is thinking about you
when you will come and take me as a bride
we would start a new journey with soul
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Anamika Jalan
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Vishal Sharma 22 July 2013

poem reflecting love and a pure one love the poem very much

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2013

you made me waiting for you with broken eyes... A heart is broken, eyes are not. Instead of 'broken eyes', 'weeping eyes' would suit better.

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