What are you doing?
Why are you like this?
You love me one second and hate me the next
You hug me then push me away
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Holy cow... I love this.. So good!
i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! its full of feeling and honesty and people can really relate.....
This is really good. But I think instead of the title: Broken Dreams and Broken Hearts - I think the title should be Black Rose. But it's really good. :)
ok u think im too nice.... this one could use some work. lol ^_^
well written :)) i can feel what u felt dude.. what i liked that this one is so clear and transparent i like poems to be like that so u can directly understand the message behind the letters and i think u did a gd job :))