Tuesday, January 30, 2024

Broken Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.7

The pieces of my heart remains scatter and fall
like the fragments of a mirror
the light that once shone bright is now but a faint glow
a shadow of what was a memory to explore.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2024

Nice allegory, Asim. Good work

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2024

Dreams maybe broken but we must keep on dreaming to give colors to our journey in life. A poignant write adorned with wonderful images.

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Aarzoo Mehek 31 January 2024

Broken dreams like the broken mirror reflects the pain one goes through. Erase it from the memory to create space for new dreams. Beautiful poem

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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