Broken Dreams Comments

This has made me cry a lot.. I weep for your loss. You have written with such Love and a prayer to The Lord.. I hope your heart is mended love can enter your heart.. I have prayed The Lord give you comfort and much deeper prayers.... let it be so... Beautiful. thank you for sharing....johannax

Great lines. I like them. Sad but very touching. The poem made me think about some important issues in my life. And it seems to be a song more than a verse, doesn`t it) ? Anyway, good panning. Thank you for sharing.

Very touching and heart wrenching poem, I felt your sadness all the way through it. My son says it sounds like a song by Dream Theater from 1979. Very good write. RoseAnn