Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Broken Dreams Comments

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Drowning in my own dream, once I wished to come true
Believing the lies I hear and seeing truths not there.
See the rays of sunlight; they shine upon my wounded heart
Reaching for that broken smile among the hidden stars
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 27 January 2013

A Shattered dream spills with hot tears here, Though.its heart strains, the body is cute.

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Mukesh Parmar 01 January 2013

nice thinking..! pretty different.. enjoyed reading it

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