Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Broken Dreams Comments

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I crossed the treacherous moat
In my small rowboat
Upon reaching the other side
I stopped and cried
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Smoky Hoss
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Kim Barney 30 December 2021

Nothing worse than a broken dream...

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Simon Collins 06 June 2012

Really like these interesting words

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Dave Walker 05 June 2012

A great poem, we all need dreams, but we have to take the broken ones with the good ones.

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Heather Wilson 02 June 2012

Disturbed dreams bring joy or pain sometimes but often no sense can be made from them at all even if we want to, a nice write, something to think about (or dream) .

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2012

Dreams are so often broken, but there are those which come true sometimes, and they are the ones which bring joy into our lives. Excellent poetry Smoky.

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Kevin Patrick 01 June 2012

This was wonderful, that feeling of never able to accomplish peace without the risk of some cloud always exists. A stunning though depressing work.

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Eric Cockrell 30 May 2012

we eventually pay the price... great poem!

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