Saturday, January 24, 2009

Broken Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

These tears tell a story of mine
With my so called little miss sunshine
Your tearing me up deep inside
And the pain inside me I can’t hide
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Yassar Ali
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Ridah Ellahi 04 April 2009

marvellous composition! ! seems like you have a story to tell....an experience maybe....10++++

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Maryam Khan 29 January 2009

Absolutely brilliant. It holds so much emotion. The flow was great, the word choice was astonishing and the concept blew me away. Very beautiful write. I like this one cuz its real...good one

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