Sunday, October 19, 2008

'Broken Dreams' Comments

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Just as my child brings his broken toys
with tears for me to mend,
I took my broken dreams to God
because He was my friend.
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junior frontilus
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Ms 18 September 2022

I remember this poem from many years ago it is called 'Broken dreams' although it has been slightly changed

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Maya Reid 20 November 2008

I'm not a religious person, but I love this poem and the message it sends anyway. I am impressed.

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Ryan Thompson 03 November 2008

oh this is nice and made me smile :)

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Make A Wish 24 October 2008

very good. i never knew you could write! lol i dont even know you: P

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Serenity Prayer 23 October 2008

amazing job. im speachless.

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