Monday, October 29, 2007

Broken Dreams... Comments

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You thought you had it all,
back then your happiness assured,
you gave him all you had,
and pain was your reward...
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I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel
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Amber Millar 03 July 2008

Wow, this is amazing.

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Raptured Soul 30 April 2008

This poem hit so close to home. It's amazing. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Dislocated Heart 19 March 2008

this is a really good piece of poetry.. great job! and yes.. with time.. a broken heart can heal..

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

I've had that heppen to... I can relate to how that feels...

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aww...it sounds like you were talking about me in that poem..seriously...

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Brian Mills 29 October 2007

dear poet....i too have similiar feelings like you have scripted here.....my writes are very similiar...i can totally relate to your hurt....thnx for sharing a tad bit of your heart! ! a truly amazing write! ! ! keep in touch! ! brian~

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