Broken Dreams.1211** Comments

I greedily gather these pearls, written, thank you for sharing the poem with us

Congrats Sat of being chosen, but congrats too for a beautiful work here. Seal the broken dreams with golden patience...between the crack will be lines of future art of living...not scar anymore to look upon to.

a heartfelt poem of love and dreams for everyone to cherish through bad times? .........superbly written.

Such beauty in the lines- - - -like a lingering fragrance- - - - - - deep in memories- - -To quote from this lovely poem- - Here, for you, I offer bits of my broken dreams. Hark! dark despairs, from my sleepless realms. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - With tears you had wept, close to my breast. Here, see, dusky depths of a tattered chest. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Say, venial angel, wouldn't you but accept? This aged wine, in you heart to flow and reflect. - - - - - - - - - Congratulations Sadat Tahir for Poem of the Day for a well deserving poem.

Warm embrace..... congrats on being chosen.... a big 10+++++++++

This aged wine! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

congratulations! like your poem...

Dreams are but... dreams But being broken they leave scars As we keep them in our hearts...

This is well-written and pretty good. I like how it rhymes.

Again one of your many masterpieces; I just love your unique choice of words, the use of archaic words made it even lofty and witty. I love how you keep the rhythm way till the end yet it is never a constraint for your talent. Lovely piece of art. Ro’ya

With tears you had wept, close to my breast. Here, see, dusky depths of a tattered chest. If only your life’s pieces, you bestow on me. Here, I present the honorable price, for all to see. How beautiful, romantic and graceful..I love this poem Saadat.

dreams are always dreams...full n wholesome...we give them that broken status...even if one insists they're broken, they still retain that unique power to breathe life into us...

Exquisite............what more can I say except thanx for sharing.

stunning poetry shared...concrete form at its best! ! !

beautiful poem..nice to read all through.....10

Sounds a lingering dream in you....the whole poem with all its beauty is outstanding....as usual excellent

beautiful................it has been a long time doc

Wonderful rhyme and rhythm to evoke a beautiful poem with glorious images. 'Perfume anointed, Oh, descend to my side, I put forth in humility, my fragrant tide'. 10 love Karin