Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Broken Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nothing in the world, it seems
Shatters like a broken dream
It is the ache behind the mean
Of shadows silent and unseen
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Bridgid Patrick
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Susan Jarvis 22 November 2009

Oh, if only the last stanza could become a reality then this beautiful image would come true for so many, yet these magnificent words serve to highlight the pathos of this perfectly crafted poem - a superb read. S :)

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Katherine Sessor 14 May 2008

Beautiful, just beautiful! You express your feelings greatly and your lines flow wonderfully! I love this poem! !

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