Tuesday, October 24, 2006

Broken Crutch Comments

Rating: 4.0

This morning I broke my crutch,
for you it might not be much.
But for me it's big deal you see,
cause now I can't go meet my baby.
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David Darbyshire
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Alison Cassidy 26 October 2006

This is a fun poem with a nice swing to it. I particularly liked the last line - Fred Astair is sublime! Enjoyed this very much. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Bridgid Patrick 24 October 2006

Nice one David.xx

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Tiyler Durden 24 October 2006

Nice one Dave but Meet has to e's in it,10 for tiyler

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