Saturday, January 3, 2015

Broken Clock Comments

Rating: 5.0

Songs of sorrow sprung from my heart;
All I could think about was us falling apart.
Your mind was fully alarmed.
As such, there was no time to talk.
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Mitta Xinindlu
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Kyvin Nash 11 June 2017

Wow true emotions reflected, love the tone and the punchlines more like my style...I like this poem, you put yourself in there...in the story brings a nice picture, the rhymes , the personification...line 7and 8 wonderful. Great work!!

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Kyvin Nash 11 June 2017

Wow true emotions reflected, love the tone and the punchlines more like my style...I like this poem, you put yourself in there...in the story brings a nice picture, the rhymes , the personification...line 7and 8 wonderful. Great work!!

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