Friday, August 29, 2008

Broken Child Comments

Rating: 4.8

I see the face of a broken child.
A child who has seen more than his young eyes should.
I see the face of a broken child.
A child who would run away from it all if he could.
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joshua reid
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 29 August 2008

That is a great write by you.I ENJOY IT!

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Olivia Misery 29 August 2008

That was great. And so pretty sounding, haha, I can't explain it. : ] -livia

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Stephanie Fiddy 29 August 2008

Wow very impacting poem. Very well written and makes it makes me think about my peers at school.

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