Broken Butterfly Comments

Wipe away your tears Get down from your high I know you have pain and fears Oh please, broken butterfly. Personification of a butterfly. you speak so much of human pain remaining in the image of the broken butterfly. a good literary piece is your poem. liked it very much. tony

It must be my lucky day when I wander into your site, There is so much beauty in the poems that you write. .-10

thank you both for the supportive comments! it brings me much joy! :)

Such a beautiful poem. Nicely done!

Every living creature has its inevitable pain to ponder, to bear and to find delight in when relieved! whether broken or not, pain is an invariable aspect connected to destiny. i have, sometimes past, composed a similar thought on a kite and a butterfly, whom we tried to save, and succeeded, it was rather pretty real an experience. fyi only. good penning what you have done. God Bless. rgds and so much love.