Monday, August 18, 2008

Broken..... But Not Tearing Apart Comments

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many times in my life..... i've been broken
yet! i persist and stand strong picking up
those scattered broken parts, wishing to hold it
back in my hands
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Antonio Liao
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Kesav Easwaran 20 August 2008

a broken mind trying to hold on to the will for leading life...expressions good...'tears in the valley of no return' is a beautiful poem phrsae...impressive write 10

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Chris Newlash 18 August 2008

Ahhh, you've not broken, just disturbed and cracked lol. great poem, read some of mine u might like them!

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Antonio Liao

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