Thursday, July 7, 2011

Broken But Not Quite Yet Defeated Comments

Rating: 5.0

Take those roses now
And burn them
Turn them into lust
What does it take?
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Diego Adrian Manriquez
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Danielle from California 08 January 2021

yup a Navy nerd with a Civic wrote this

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Elena Sandu 06 October 2011

Good poem! ! Love it, tried to give it a 10 but seems that internet today is not my friend, lol. Thank you for share, loved it.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 July 2011

Wow! Diego, just the title of this straight forwards poem left me speechless! Very impressive and well penned! It reminds me of poem I wrote and posted titled: A LOVE'S GAME! You can read it when time permits and you will see the similarities! I went through that many times and I survived. I totally refused to stay handcuffed to the chair of the Past when I had the Key to myself free! Guess what Diego? I finally did! Keep inspiring the World with your great writes! Love and Peace for always! ...

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