Thursday, November 20, 2008

Broken, Bruised, Bloody Comments

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A couple passes by on the street
In them, I see our broken possibility
A love song bleeds through my speakers
In the guitar solo, I hear your heartbeat
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Maya Reid
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Renee Tidmore 20 November 2008

I love the way you have been able to put the feelings of a broken relationship into words. As I read through your poem, I found myself taken back in time when I first had my heart broken. The wounds were just as the ones you have put here. Excellent poem! Renee

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Maya Reid

Maya Reid

New Jersey
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Maya Reid
New Jersey
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