Monday, May 2, 2005

Broken Bones Comments

Rating: 4.5

They gave me reality alterations-
told me to rest:
tomorrow will bring better days.
I question the existence of tomorrow-
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Amberlee Carter
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Goldy Locks 25 May 2006

i like how you ended this with a question. throws the reader into a spin back to the start. Sus.

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Uriah Hamilton 26 July 2005

The opening line is brilliant and the whole poem is meaningful. Thanks, Amberlee.

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