Wednesday, August 28, 2019

Broken Beyond Repair Comments

Rating: 5.0

Emptiness from within
Darkness my sin
Wanting to break free
But I can't you see,
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Luzaan de Bruyn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Michael Walker 28 August 2019

It was a good idea to write about depression, so that you could at least define it. Possibly writing about the topic is cathartic (cleansing of emotion) also. 'Broken beyond repair'. I know where you are coming from. I enjoyed this poem.

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