Broken Beyond Repair Comments

dont forget that thers always be people who care

lovely poem...wonderfull!

what many fail to realize, is that when someone's broken, she's left to herself and her heart yearns for a caring shoulder, or a warm hug or someone to hold on to.. just to return to normalcy as soon as possible.. we are still humans.. not made of steel.. we fall, we fail and we rise again.. very human - strong emotions.7/10

Rachelle! ! ! Remember when I wrote the poem broken beyond repair? I've also said the sentence that you pretend to be happy? ? ? Now, I feel sad: ( Very good though

no one stands for you but your own self... my poem 'alone' will speak to you on this...take courage...start afresh...cheer up...lovely write..

You broken? ? ? ? ? Rachelle you are one of my favorite young poets you tell it how it is and if this is how it is today then you are honest to that and that honesty is your great strengh... I love this piece and I love you. Stay well Rachelle we all love you in poetry Ciberspace