Broken, Beat & Scarred (Prose) Comments
He crawled out from under my bed; I felt the darkness as he pulled me down - as he tried to drag me down!
He slashed my neck, but I fought back! O, how I fought back! I fought back with all my might! … However, my body couldn't take it anymore; So, I stood still, defenseless, and watched the strength of my body as it slowly slipped away. I started to decay, to the point where I was so close of giving up. My little heart was on the verge of bursting with rage because I felt so weak and powerless in front of him.
I lost my senses!
But then, again, I pushed back! I fought against that unrelenting beast!
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Oh noh is dis true n persönal? Such a dark tragic violent poem! Do tel me in mail who n what dis is about! Did u kill him?
What is dis about n about whom? Did u really kill him? Such a tragic dark violent poem pls do tel me if its true, even in poem mail. Yor literal n literacy effort here is very nice thumbs up!
:) WELL DONE. This poem was as if a story came to life out of one of my favorite novels. Absolutely wonderful!
Its seriously a great write... expressed perfctly hurt and pain... nice work...
so wonderful poem... i loved ur expression n sharpnessTremeadous hurt and pain how to explain? you stood well but remained defenseless to tell....10
Vivid with descriptions that transmit the agony of the female to the reader. It is very good actually, not as a poem, but as prose. Bravo!
Between the gasps there is a gap; still good presentation of a female spirit to escape molestation well ppresented.
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7/28/2025 3:23:42 AM # 1.0.0
Damn.You are so intense plus you have excellent diction