Tuesday, December 13, 2005

Broken Angel Comments

Rating: 4.3

i smile a fake smile
so no one can actually see
that my pain is over whelming
that i could never leave
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Joan Johnson
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Janelle Morehart 23 March 2007

Great poem, potential there alot of it, I like how you compared yourself as to being an angel, not many would do that for fear of sounding conceited or inadequit but whatever, i just really like this poem and I do hope that your writing more Merci Pour Le Venin, Janelle ^_^

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Lakshmi Padmanabhan 09 June 2006

I think its one of the most meaningful pieces of writing i've ever seen..it is officially my favorite poem

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Jaime Johnson 19 January 2006

Joan, i just got to read that poem, when did you write it i cried. darn you! it's beautiful. WRITE MORE!

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