Broken And Proud Comments

The poem nicely portrays the quality of life and plight of a common man in a modern society. People running round trying to find their ground

The truth is always the key in poetry=)

Ooh! So amazing, truely wonderful

Love it! never thought of it put like that before, and it has opened my eyes wider than they've ever been.

I like this poem. What an insight to the mediocrity of living...life is something more...and your poem makes us aware and feel it.

This is a beautiful poem, incredible write. Nice work, this poem flowed well. :)

nicely written..... true words and theme.your work is amazing.keep it up! ! ! God Bless You! ! !

You say when you need, you never tell except it have to share..there's no other way better than dissolve the real things in writing..as your writing is for us..feeding us with thinking...and Dave, you got nice pen with unlimited ink.. :) _Unwritten Soul

sharp and deep. well written. love it.

so true and well written, Cat

Powerful and poignant dave. Good write. Regards Craig

right there with you! strong, defiant poetry!