Broken And Empty Comments

My dear friend....... when I read each line of this poem.....I could feel your pain... there is no life without pain but self harming is not the solution for all these pain.... May God bless you

This discribes how you feel when your hurting so much, you want to end your life, the budern we carrie at times are to much for us to bare, how can we carrie on, excellent write my friend, your a brillant poet.

It's a defense action, like cutting a snake bite to get draw out the venom, but unfortunately most times it bleeds to much while still the violent pain of the venom still races through our veins, and/or infection sets in later, if we survive, and the very thing we try to escape kills us in the end, worse way to go then the original snake bite. Your poem has deep emotion, and is very moving. Good write. :)

this poem is descriptive, gives a picture in your, it is nice and gives an insight what it feels to be broken and empty, though everybody feels, few have courage to write and that to in a poetry. nice Poem keep on writing :)

This was a very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it because it talks about sadness and pain, and the very thought of death, or close to death. This was a magnificent write, I could read it over and over, you definitely got a 10 for this, great job! And I only hope these words never come to life for you, stay happy, and write magnificently like you have been! ! =D

very nice.there is sadness and pain in the lines.liked it.