Broken Comments

Anyone who wants change out of you doesn't really love who you are. And if so, how can one say they love you at all? Perfection is a fantasy. Change won't make the false so.

very inter resting........

Awesome, but I would say, All of us are broken chips, Our love is only lip tp lip; Ocean hits the earth hard, In its turn the rains rewards. CP

I like this one especially because I can relate to so many people telling me they care and then turning right around and saying, 'If you would do this then I'd like you better.' It's ridiculous.....

Such an emotional piece....Something many will relate to..I feel that your spacing adds to the effect that a letter has been written...great piece..Thank you for this... Best of Health & Happiness Jon

i freaking love this poem! ! ! ! u did so well! ! ! keep writing! ! ! i cant wait to read more of ur work

Beautiful deep verse..something we all find ourselves wondering at times...thank you