Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Living in a place, that seem so subdued.
Everywhere I look, shattered thing's all around.
People, place, and thing's, life seem, so rude.
Why, I can't put everything, back together again.
...
Read full text

Derrick Clark
COMMENTS
Marci Made 19 June 2007

You are headed in the right direction in this poem....to the place where one day all will be healed...very, very good poem......speaking of heading, are you near New Albany, Yes? ? ? ~~~~~~~~marci. :)

0 0 Reply
Derrick Clark

Derrick Clark

tulare california
Close
Error Success