Broken Poem by Lamar Cole

Broken

Rating: 5.0


She was broken.
And he picked up the pieces.
And made her whole again.
Only to drop her and watch her shatter.
She learned to pray.
Pick up her own pieces.
And make herself whole.

Friday, September 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2020

A poignant and moving poem. Very inspiring. Through prayers we can conquer life's sufferings and darkness. A well conveyed write.

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Soran M. H 04 September 2020

very dramatic imagery with positive ending deserves 10+ well done and thanks for sharing

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Soran M. H 04 September 2020

Pick up her own pieces. And make herself whole.

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M Asim Nehal 04 September 2020

Yes that is how world treats us and that is how we should respond. Thoughtful poem.10

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