Friday, December 7, 2018

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken

I see the silence of your heart, it is vivid in your mannerisms, contrary to your intended portrayal,
I see the shadow of escaping trust, the inward battle so sadly projected,extended effort it does entail,
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Nell Sheridan
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Carl Roussell 07 December 2018

I second Susan's comment, you have captured the essence of friendship in this poem, a 10

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

A 10 is such an honour. I am so glad you enjoyed the write.

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Susan Lacovara 07 December 2018

Such a beautiful declaration of sharing one's sorrow, lending comfort and care, unconditionally. You have indeed written a blueprint for what true friendship entails. Excellent penning!

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. There is much to be said of true friendship.

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