I smiled trying, when love came crying,
In a pool of tears I tried finding,
Where the mud I fell in I tried washing,
Soaked still in the thoughts of past dirt,
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Broken indeed! Well worded and thoughtfully titled is this compelling and captivating composition of emotional battlement and love and pain!
Thanks For all your congratulatory messages I really appreciate it
Congratulations! When love comes crying tear falls down and this provokes thought. This poem is very amazingly penned that carries emotion. A brilliant poem is shared. This is a perfect poem of the day...10
Broken Heart! ! ! 'Whiles wine mocks this journey I trek'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
a poem of heartfelt suffering lines, Jcson live and learn to find better times? ..............well penned
Something a little different. Great imagination. Vivid imagery. Unique creative style. Really enjoyed it. Jcson, Congrats on Poem Of The Day!
Really a sad and poignant narrative piece of poetry, well thought out and nicely crafted from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jcson.
still I go on, do on; no obstacle can protest / bar me, ..... great write, come on poet, ..... congrats
A refined poetic imagination, Jcson. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Soaked still in the thoughts of past dirt, A fall from height in hurt, A Brut drink I seek for these thirst, ....joy remains a threat veryfine poem and thoughts. thank u dear poet. tony
It reads even better the second time. Super sentences of sadness but with a powerful potential for redemption!