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Wonderful poem! Really enjoyed reading it :) Good job

piercincing my heart with old. spear of Pity. wonderful line and expression. thank you poet for sharing the lines. - Siddartha

Jaya, this is an amazing and profound piece of poetry. It captures what so often comes out from within. The amazing thing is, sometimes those around us are little aware of the external pains or what we see as imperfections. Ultimately, that's both good and bad. A great poem.

Well written...Congratulations! !