Friday, February 24, 2006

Broken Comments

Rating: 3.8

Your tie is crooked.
You're broken.

Your slip is showing.
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John Kipling Lewis
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x... x... 14 November 2007

In a way a part of all of us is broken, the difference being in the amount of damage done....I think of it as 'Bits and pieces of my Heart wandering to and fro..I ask, Which way am I to go? '..Fractured hearts and fractured lives, c'est la vie, oui? . marci.m.

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K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Good one, simple too.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

4. Doesn't say much. Has images, but only on a shallow, barely sketched dimension. The idea is good. It needs to be treated in a more detailed manner.

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Deanna Victor 05 November 2007

Funny, but true. Nice and simple.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

Manhattan, KS
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