Monday, March 11, 2013

Broken Comments

Rating: 4.8

Broken man with eyes so vacant
Heart so tarnished, scars so deep
Waning patience, tattered memories
Rancid thoughts too spoiled to keep
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Holly Jamestone
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Lyn Pendleton 11 March 2013

Wonderfully written. Packed with great lines. The hopelessness of him seems somewhat unfair to me. Life having to be a race or a contest is sad for those who can't compete for what ever reason. How nice if people could stop hating the unfortunate. But no one likes you when your down... Anyway, excellent poem. take care

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Holly Jamestone

Holly Jamestone

Denver, CO U.S.A.
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