Thursday, May 31, 2012

Broken Comments

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I smile because i have to
i breathe because i have to
i live only to please others
when still not good enough
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Darkangel Flyfree
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Guess Who 01 May 2013

I'm broken and you don't even see it ...... Excellent expression which i loved..... you have a very good poem here about being Hit By Sorrow about being broken apart....... i really liked it..... hope you came through this state of soul since last year ....... keep it up Guess Who

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Thoughts Of A Poet 06 August 2012

that was a good poem i love it sooooooooo much

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Hamid Negah 27 July 2012

very nice i enjoyed so much.

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Black On Black Arts 19 July 2012

that poem hits home we are more alike than i expected you are an angel of poetic grace forever flying forever free

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Very sad, but I'm sure most of can relate to the pain you are so elequently have written about

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Lady Keva 05 June 2012

Love this poem I can relate

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